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..its not a story book.. by =Dancing-Naked:iconDancing-Naked:



Handful of letters scattering the garden path.
The cat comes  scattering leaves, losing letters.

Dusk falls, days pass , time spins and suddenly
our lips come in contact with reality.

God forgive us for wanting it to be easy.
The ocean calls, and she's gone running.
Salt bites, tears sting - she's still off swimming.

Snow White never had a chance to do anything but live happily ever after
Warning signs flash and the road forks right.
Girls like me, take road trips and write love notes on band-aids.

She doesn't need a happily ever after

Sorry for your broken heart, you'll find it with the letters lost on the garden path.
Kitty's playing and you're just saying we'll see.

See me, as I turn to walk way.
Kites fluttering like lovers new, getting naked for the first time.
Your belly leads to a road I'll miss taking.

We're one shade away from goodbye

Yet Prince Charming was never code for everything.
Cinderella used to get lost in books, why do we never talk about that part of the movie?
She's taken another way, making her own fantasy.

Story book ending = another little girl lost, found beginning.
©2008-2009 =Dancing-Naked
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Author's Comments

My insperation

"Love Song" ~ Sara Bareilles [link]

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Some cats [link]

An Ocean

[link]

Snow 'Cone'
[link]

Roads and Kites
[link]

Doors
[link]

That shiny new kiss
[link]

Browsing d.a looking for things 'leaving' found me these.

Closer to home inspirations

I leave April 11,
Good Friday,
Memories,
Gary <3
1000 other things.

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:iconcinthiastimson:
It dances through my mind -- :wow: Its excellent :rose:

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:iconpommy-girl:
I like it a lot :)

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:icondarkchil:
happily ever after is just where you stop telling the story
and i really like the line"Yet Prince Charming was never code for everything."

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Bliss can be a state of profound spiritual satisfaction, happiness or joy, often associated with religious ideas of the afterlife.

I can taste colours

:heart:Bunny X Duck:heart:
:icondancing-naked:
<3 Thank you so much
:icondarkchil:
thats ok i like to get this insite into your mind

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Bliss can be a state of profound spiritual satisfaction, happiness or joy, often associated with religious ideas of the afterlife.

I can taste colours

:heart:Bunny X Duck:heart:
:iconloud-chaos:
:clap: I really love it...
"Girls like me, take road trips and write love notes on band-aids."

I freakin love it. You used one of my pics as inspiration and then turned around and inspired me :XD: :D :heart:

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Prepare your mind... for a MIND EXPLOSION! :explosion:

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