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Remnants of October and ... by =Dancing-Naked:iconDancing-Naked:



I'll never forget that one kiss in October, because I have nothing else to remember.
You walked the walk and talked the talk but yet I am the one standing still and all alone.
Romantic notions broken, lips scared from over use and your abuse.

I wonder if anyone pays attention to the quite whore.
She sits alone with her makeup half on.
Dignity still intact with the promise of her one kiss in October,
What will happen when she knows what I know now?   

Do they see the street singer out of sync out of tune?
He sings on the cold street, left to his own devices.
Collecting coin for a song about hope for his kiss in October,
Will the showers of silver and gold stop…
When the empty souls walking by, know what I know now?

Can you remember the lunch lady with rosy checks?
She used to laugh and play when we passed her by.
Slender hips and sexy wrist that caught my eye,
Did you hear when her laughter stopped?
She taught me about goodbyes and the power of long ago kisses in October….

We are an army of scared loves wallowing in our own demise. Waiting for the promise land to come back again, searching for the missing angles to take our hands once again.
The fortune tellers whisper about our lack of life lines, I guess they don’t know about the wonders of October kisses and the black magic of love.
©2006-2009 =Dancing-Naked
:icondancing-naked:

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Full Title - Remnants of October and Black Magic
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So..., I got a challenge for all yas. Ooo, a challenge :D

Write a poem starting with the line:

"I'll never forget that one kiss in October..."

Take it from there!

(No; this does not have to be sappy romantic unless you wish for it to be.)

Tis a contest. Which means prizes. Promotional signature, of course, for a week. And uh....I dunno, what prize would you guys like. Open to suggestions.

Oh yea,...Please link your entry to me when you post it :D Thanks!

Deadline for now is Oct. 25th at 7:00 p.m.


Well her wish will always be my comand so this is my bitter sweet attempt to talk about kisses ...

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:iconelectrobaby:
a as always great job! Awws...:hug: I am always open to your wishes as well :D

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"You don't have to suffer to be a poet; adolescence is enough suffering for anyone."
-John Ciardi (1916 - 1986)
:iconluko:
The fortune tellers whisper about our lack of life lines ...

Les diseurs de bonnes aventures soupirent à propos de notre manque de ligne de vie ...

The fortune tellers should smile abot your love lines ...

October kiss is a romantic one ... Le baiser d'octobre ...
:icondancing-naked:
Thank you so much Luko your words always give me hope ...

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:icondancing-naked:
Just like you :) Thank you very much
:iconsaturnineguise:
=D lol thanks, you do know how to fluff up my ego dont you =p lol
:icondancing-naked:
That or I'm just good at being honest :)

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