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I need you.

And the hatred in your eyes,

The impatience in your sighs,

Your intolerability for everything that moves me,

I need you to hate me.

So I can rise to the challenge.

Letting my self over come your self imposed boundaries.

Giving my self a reason to finish the story,

I need you to hurt me

My boiling blood will keep us warm,

Black and blue shall slim me down,

Others won’t have to ask why I cry.

Fuck indifference, please just hate me

So that I can turn this love into something violent,
and try to hate you back


Hate me so I can learn how to not Love You.
©2006-2009 =Dancing-Naked
:icondancing-naked:

Author's Comments

If your looking for a happy ending fuck off beacuse you wont find it here and I don't even like him.

Maybe this is about you, Maybe it's about two people ...

Maybe it's just about my feelings about love and hate.

I can not hate if I do not love.

And then maybe it's just what happens when I start thinking about fear.


I'll get there - Katrine

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:iconkitsuneparker:
I think we have the same opinion about this life, I hate everythings around me.. even myself huhu viva haters!!!

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year zero no god no music no art no future
:icondancing-naked:
My view on life is multi layered and hard to grasp and strangly enough some how most of the time I manage to love my self, but I'm self destructive ...

:) It's confusing :)

But Huhuh viva haters away :)
:iconkitsuneparker:
hate something or someone its kind a new love... love to be haters... and that make me much learn about life, oneday if I really tired from it... I just wanna kill myself, maybe its oneway to find the endless love..

dont be confuse.. sometimes people create his own life, happy or not it doesn't matter... the important things, dont ever blame yourself.. what ever you do in your life.. you must go on... happy haters!!

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year zero no god no music no art no future
:icondancing-naked:
:) You are more cool then I fisrt thought you where ...

Katrine x
:iconkitsuneparker:
haha thanks... blushy..blushy...

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year zero no god no music no art no future
:iconelectrobaby:
I relate to this.

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"You don't have to suffer to be a poet; adolescence is enough suffering for anyone."
-John Ciardi (1916 - 1986)
:icondancing-naked:
Yeah, it came to me from a petty situation and the person in question I did like but I don't any more but it still kinda flowed :)
:iconshebo:
love hate love.....im glad u got that out of ur system...or is there any traces left there?:)

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"we are the imagination of ourselves" B.H
:icondancing-naked:
Always are, but this poem I enjoy and as I don't really feel that way about him it makes me giggle that my words ran away from me.

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